Pitch Bible 1

My first pitch bible is simple to gets straight to the point.

The feedback I received encouraged a mixed painterly style for the backgrounds to match the textured effect i'd used on my characters. I had rendered my animatic incorrectly and had lost the sound but overall the pace of tension seemed good for the time limitation the animation had. However, the timing for each scene might be too long so I will shorten that during my animating process.

The artistic choices I made regarding the colours and saturation to reference classic films like Susperia and The Ring were complimented and the theme of hunger/feasting/deteriorating shown through motifs in the backgrounds emphases the feeling of dread.

Originally, I was going to have a loud, heavy soundscape but the feedback I received is less is more and to focus on three. I have picked: static, wind and the shriek/feeding.