- I fixed the kiss - the torso of the ghost needed to be more visibly and he hands should be up and together. It makes sense narratively and looks more natural.
- Throughout the development of this book, I generally stuck to the thumbnails; this helped me stay organised as I had a set time for a page to be complete. The first spread is the only one that changed dramatically. I need up using the new page for the cover (with altered colours) because I liked it would wrap around the book, splitting the ghost and girl apart.
- I’m really dissatisfied with the text for the cover and would change that dramatically or simply not include any text at all.
- Unfortunately, when I went to submit this project to the competition, the price for submission was revealed. The price had not been revealed prior to the submission tab being made available. It was too expensive for me to afford this year but I definitely will take this competition up again next year. I think this project challenged me to work quickly at a consistent standard. It has also challenged my organisation skill as I set out a fixed deadline for each stage of each page and had to adapt when there were hold ups or revisions needed. I also think it allowed me to experiment. I have come away from this feeling more confident as an artist and happy with the end result.
- I intend to print off som physical copies to sell as zines after the deadline. I may also single pages off to open zine submissions I’ve found online.
(Frontispiece and dedication page)
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